A Short Story
So I've had this idea for a story rattling
around in my head for a little while. It’s a bit different for me as it’s a
departure from the kind of stuff I usually write… it’s my first foray into this
side of my brain. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it! π
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Daddy's Girl
Jen
was sitting on the concrete patio that surrounded the pool in her backyard.
She liked to get up early in the summertime so that she could spend a few
moments outside before getting ready for work. She stared at the crystal clear,
blue-tinted water swirling around her
toes as her legs dangled against the side wall at the shallow end.
It was a beautiful hourglass design, with a slide that
turned like a corkscrew, depositing its passengers into the deepest part of the
pool.
Jen thought back to all the fun her family had over the
years; the parties, the long drawn out afternoons developing the perfect tan, the
moonlight swims after a hard day.
The grounds around the pool were just as beautiful as the
pool itself. A rock garden on one side that had hidden Bluetooth speakers
shaped like the rocks, provided the perfect tunes whenever needed. A lush green
area on the other side, manicured so tightly that you could use it as a putting
green. There was a small pool house that her dad built that had enough room to
store extra towels, flotation chairs with drink holders, and a porta-potty so
you didn’t track water dripping from your bathing suit into the house.
Jen had inherited the house when her parents had passed on
several years ago. She loved this house, and her dad had put a lot of work into
the park-like backyard. He had also taught her the importance of maintaining a
yard like this—the time it took to keep everything perfect—using the right
tools, the right seed, and most importantly, the right fertilizer. The fertilizer
was the key, he always said. She
had developed quite the green thumb thanks to her dad. She felt a little guilty
though because lately, she had been considering selling the property. She was
single, and it was really too much house and yard for one person.
Property values had soared in her neighborhood over the last
few years, and she knew she would be able to cash in if she were to sell. But
now she was worried. She was worried that her property was about to go down in
value. She was worried because she was pretty sure that the dead body floating
face down in the shallow end of her pool would affect the value. People were
funny about buying houses where a murder might’ve taken place.
She probably should have called 911, but her curiosity was
getting the best of her. She jumped into the water and waded across to where
the man was floating. She circled around him a couple of times trying to decide
if she should touch him or not. She finally reached out and poked him on the
top of the head.
Between the poke and the waves she created, the body bobbed
up and down and began to rotate. It startled her, and she jumped back before
she remembered that he was dead. She moved closer to him and grabbed the hair
on the back of his head and lifted it up as high as she could. She looked at
his face, and even though it was a bit bloated from being submerged in water,
she was relieved that she didn’t recognize him. She studied his features and
was astonished at how good looking he was. Even with the large hole that seemed
to have been caused by a bullet entering through the forehead and appearing to
have exited through the back of his skull. What
a waste, she thought, as she let his face drop back into the water.
She swam over to the ladder and climbed out of the pool.
After toweling herself off, Jen sat on one of the lounge chairs set up by the
deep end and lit up a cigarette. She contemplated what her next move should be
and by the time she had finished her second smoke, a plan had formed in her
mind.
Jen walked over to the gate and made sure it was securely
locked before heading into the house. The fence and gate were made of wide wooden
planks, so she knew that no one could see into her backyard. Her father had
made sure that the fence had been built tall enough that the perverted kids in
the neighborhood wouldn’t be able to drool over his daughter while she laid
around soaking up the sun. She silently thanked him for that now, as it also
provided the privacy she would need to carry out her plan.
Jen made her way back inside, showered, and dressed for
work. She locked up the house and headed out to start her day.
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At
nine AM the next morning, Jen walked out to the pool
area. She noticed that Johnny—she thought he looked like a Johnny—had floated
to the shallow end and was lying across
the steps, half in and half out of the knee-high
water.
She chuckled. “You look like a beached whale, Johnny,” she
said. “But at least you’ll be easier for me to pull out of the water now.”
She leaned down, and grabbing him from under the arms,
pulled the body the rest of the way up the steps and out of the pool. The body
had obviously taken in a lot of water, which made him heavier than she’d expected.
She dragged him across the cement deck and onto the manicured lawn. Exhausted,
she flopped down on the grass beside him.
“Today’s Saturday,” she smiled. “We get to spend the whole
day together.”
Somewhere in the back of her mind, she knew what she was
doing was wrong. Somebody was probably looking for this guy. He was shot through the head, for God’s
sake! But she was enjoying the fantasy, and she could make up any story she
wanted about how this man ended up in her yard, in her pool. She didn’t know if
he was a bad guy that paid the ultimate price for things he’d done, or if he
was an innocent victim of a crime.
Still lying on the ground next to the body, Jen propped
herself up on her left side, using her elbow and forearm to steady herself. She
reached over with her right hand and ran it through the dead man’s hair. She
stroked his hair, being careful to avoid the gaping hole on the backside of his
head. She noticed that his hair seemed stiff and dirty.
“Those pool chemicals certainly didn’t do your hair any
favors,” she sighed. “But don’t worry, I’ve got some really good shampoo that
will wash those nasty chemicals right out.” She smiled as she continued to
gently stroke his head. “Then we’ll put some conditioner in there—don’t you
fret, Johnny, your hair will be soft as silk when I’m through.” She paused, and
then staring into his lifeless eyes, said, “Let’s get you out of those wet
clothes and clean that nasty gash on your head.” She jumped up. “Don’t go
anywhere, I’ll be right back,” she called out over her shoulder as she ran to
the house.
Jen went into her bedroom and rifled through the clothes
hanging in her closet. She settled on a men’s muted yellow polo shirt that was
folded on the shelf behind the men’s button-down
dress shirts and pants that were neatly positioned on hangers. Next, she went over to the dresser and found a
drawer filled with men’s shorts and pulled out a nice khaki colored pair that
she thought complimented the yellow shirt. She also grabbed a clean pair of boxers
and socks. As she turned to leave, she stopped and thought about what she was
doing. It didn’t make any sense… this was wrong! After a moment she
sighed as she felt her mind clear. Something was wrong and she now realized what that something was—she turned
back towards the dresser and returned the socks to the drawer. Johnny was not a sock guy, she decided. Instead,
she grabbed a pair of lightweight boat shoes from the closet. That’s better, she thought. But she still
felt this nagging feeling that something was off as she left the bedroom. A
brief memory that she couldn’t quite catch flashed through her mind. She
furrowed her brows. The men’s clothes.
Why did she have a closet and dresser filled with men’s clothes? She smiled, well, of course, they must be daddy’s old
clothes! She sighed with relief certain that was what the memory flash was
about—her father. She smiled as she thought about him. She missed her dad.
Maybe that’s why she felt the need to make sure Johnny was properly taken care
of? Feeling satisfied with her explanation of that pesky nagging sensation, she
went to the adjoining bathroom and took a bottle of shampoo and conditioner
from a shelf above her tub, grabbed two clean towels, and headed back outside
to where Johnny was waiting.
“Okay, Johnny,” she said as she tugged on the dead guy’s
pants. “Let’s get these heavy, wet clothes off your body.”
Jen spent the next twenty minutes stripping off all the wet
items from the corpse. She dried off his legs, his torso, and his private
parts. She blushed slightly as she wiped him down.
“My, you certainly are impressive,” she whispered with a shy
smile. She grabbed his arms and pulled him back toward the pool. Dunking his
head back into the water, she said, “It’s time we get that ugly wound cleaned out
and get your hair nice and silky soft.”
She used one of the towels to gently clean inside the bullet
hole that had torn apart the lifeless head. After she was satisfied that she
had wiped away all the dry crusty blood from around the opening, she began to
work the shampoo and conditioner into the hair. When she had properly washed
and rinsed the stringy hair to her liking, she leaned in and inhaled deeply.
“That’s better,” she said, softly stroking the strands. “Now
you smell like flowers in a funeral home. What do you think Johnny?” She laughed at that. He had no comment—he was
the strong, silent type.
Jen began to dress Johnny. She was meticulous in wanting to
make sure that everything was just right. She took her time tucking the yellow
shirt into the khaki shorts so that there were no visible lines or wrinkles
anywhere. Once satisfied that he was perfect, she slipped on the boat shoes.
She stepped back and admired her work. Boat
shoes were definitely the way to go, she thought, smiling.
She sighed deeply as she stood back and looked across the
pool at the perfect lawn. Well, it was perfect until last night, that is. Jen
had dug an eight foot long by four-foot
deep hole right in the middle of the perfect grass. She hated messing up such
perfection but it was actually a necessary part of why the grass was so lush
and green. If she dug down any further than four feet she would lose the
benefit of the fertilization effect Johnny would provide. And besides, the last
time, the lawn had bounced right back within a month or two, so the eyesore
digging up the lawn caused was only temporary anyway.
The phone vibrating in her pocket startled her. She had
forgotten she even had it with her. “Hello,” she said after digging it from her
pocket.
“Hey, Jen… its Dr. Sherry,” said the woman on the other end
of the phone. “You missed our appointment yesterday.”
Jen felt her heart drop into her stomach. Shit! She steeled herself before
replying. “Oh, hi Dr. Sherry. Yeah… I’m sorry about that. I meant to call you
before I left yesterday. I had to get right home. I... I was expecting company.”
Her reply was met with silence. After a few seconds, Dr. Sherry
Taylor sighed into the phone. “Jen, this is the third appointment you’ve missed
in the last month. You know you’re required to check in with me twice a week…
every Tuesday and Friday.” She paused. “I can’t continue to let this slide. I’m
coming to do a home visit today. I’ll see you in an hou—”
Jen cut her off in a panic. “NO!” she said much more
forcefully than she wanted. She backed her tone down immediately. “I mean… I
can’t. I’ve… got plans this afternoon.” Her hand was shaking as she tried to
keep her grip on the phone. “I’ll be in your office first thing Monday morning…
I promise!”
The doctor sighed deeply into the phone. “Jen,” she began,
“the Judge was very specific on the terms of your release. You’ve done a good
job showing up for work every day, but I’m a little worried that you’re not
taking our weekly meetings seriously.” She paused. “You want to continue to get
better, don’t you?”
Hmmph, she
thought. Better! What a joke! They don't care if I get better! How can I be expected to get better when they don’t understand me…
don’t trust me?
She looked over at Johnny laying by the pool. She closed her
eyes and said into the phone, “Yes, Dr. Sherry, I want to continue to get
better.”
“Good. So I’ll see you in an hour, then,” she said, sounding
relieved. “If everything goes well during the home visit, I’ll mark your record
as up to date… that is if you promise not
to miss any more of our meetings.”
“You have my word, Doctor.” Jen pushed the end button on her
phone and threw it in the deep end of the pool.
She still didn’t believe that she was the monster they tried
to paint her out to be. How could she be? She loved her parents… she would
never hurt them, let alone murder them. But how could she ever get society to understand?
Even though she was deemed not guilty by way of insanity, she knew she was
still vilified by people. Nobody understood how much she loved her parents and
she was just going to have to accept that truth.
When her mom got sick, she begged her dad to end her pain…
but he couldn’t do it. Jen couldn’t stand to see her mom or dad suffer, so when
they were sleeping one night, she ended the pain they both felt. Although he
didn’t say it, she knew that daddy couldn’t live without her mom, so she sent
their souls to heaven together.
She shook her head as she thought about the events afterward. If only she had kept her mouth shut.
The whole thing was circumstantial anyways… there were no bodies. The problem
was that she had said too much. When that nosy neighbor, Mrs. Finch, reported
that she hadn’t seen her parents for a while and was sure something was wrong,
she got nervous and told the police what she had done, and why. The problem was
that it’s against the law to end someone’s pain and suffering. When she
realized that she could go to prison for simply helping her parents, she
refused to give up where the bodies were located… and she certainly couldn’t
let them see how many times she had plunged the knife into their bodies. She
had gotten carried away. She knew that now, but once she pierced the flesh that
first time, she just couldn’t stop. Something took over in her mind. She kept
punching and punching and punching that knife into her mom and dad, over and
over again, until there were no unscathed areas anywhere on her parent’s bodies.
She got scared. Even if she could convince everyone that her mom asked for the
pain to stop—after all, her mom was ill, they would never understand why she ended
her father’s suffering too. No, they would not accept that she knew he wouldn’t
be able to live without her mother. Let them rest in peace, no matter what
happened to her.
She sighed as she looked from where Johnny was laying, over
to the freshly dug hole in the middle of the lawn. Daddy was so proud of the
yard. She felt that she wanted to honor him by allowing them both to become a
part of the lush grounds they both loved so much. The fertilizer was the key. Once the ground had settled and the
grass began to grow back, the lawn had never been greener.
Jen looked at her watch. Dr. Taylor would be arriving in about
fifty minutes. She had a dilemma. She needed to finish taking care of Johnny.
She had carved out the whole day for this ritual. She wanted to play with
Johnny for a while longer before fertilizing the lawn but knew that the doctor would frown upon her planned activity
for the day. They already thought she was nuts… no reason to give them any
further reason to think she might really be insane. And besides, Dr. Sherry
would never believe that she found Johnny already dead in her pool. She would
probably be blamed for his death too. She just didn’t need the aggravation.
She walked back over to the pool and grabbed the corpse
rotting on the cement by the legs and dragged him across the patio and up onto
the grass.
She plopped on the ground next to the body. “Well, Johnny,”
she pouted, stroking his soft, just washed hair. “I guess this is it. I was
hoping we could get to know each other better, but I’ve got company coming, so
I have to cut our date short.”
She gently kissed him on the lips and then rolled Johnny
into the shallow grave. She had to hurry and get the dirt back into the hole
and place the grass divots back on top of the dirt. Because she was rushing to
get everything done, the sweat was dripping down her back causing her shirt to
stick to her skin. It was an icky feeling. As soon as she patted the last divot
into place, she dropped the shovel on the lawn and ran into the house and
jumped into the shower. She had just enough time to wash the dirt and grime off
her body before Dr. Sherry arrived.
When the doorbell rang, Jen called out to her visitor that
the door was open. Dr. Sherry stepped into the foyer and was met by her
patient.
“I’ve got some snacks and some lemonade set up out by the
pool,” said Jen, trying to be the good little hostess. “Why don’t we talk out
there?”
They walked through the home and out the back door. Dr.
Sherry Taylor was immediately struck by the beauty of the surroundings. “This
is a beautiful yard,” she said, as she looked around the space. “The pool is
gorgeous, a pretty rock garden, a wonderful privacy fence…” Her eyes landed on
the lawn. “Wow! I don’t think I’ve ever seen a prettier lawn.”
“Thank you,” replied Jen. She was nervous and was hoping
that the doctor didn’t notice. Her mind was racing. She wasn’t sure what was
happening, but she needed to settle down.
Dr. Sherry started to walk towards the lush green turf. Jen
trailed behind her. As they stepped onto the grass, her heart skipped a beat as
she realized she had left the shovel lying
in the middle of the lawn. She positioned herself between the shovel and Dr.
Sherry, hoping she wouldn’t notice.
“I can’t get over how green this lawn is,” Dr. Sherry said,
shaking her head in amazement. “How do you do it? How do you get a lawn like this?” She bent down and
rubbed her hand through the grass.
“The fertilizer is the key,” answered Jen. Her head was swirling
with a weird buzzing, numbing sensation and she could feel that she was losing control
of her thoughts. She was trying to fight it
but was losing. She pressed on trying to mask what was happening to her. “The
right fertilizer makes all the difference. I learned that from my daddy.”
The doctor was still bent down with her back to Jen,
fondling the grass between her fingers. “Well, whatever you’re doing, I’d keep doing
it… I wouldn’t change a thing.”
Jen leaned over, picked up the shovel and smiled. “I agree,”
she said, as she hoisted it to her shoulder using both hands. No longer
fighting the strange numbing feeling running through her head, she tightened
her grip and moved closer to Dr. Sherry.
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Great story, awesome imagery. I was able to envision the entire story.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteAwesome story. Is Dr
ReplyDeleteSherry now new fertilizer?
The ending led me wanting more.
DeleteThanks! The ending was designed to leave that to your imagination. And you know the old saying - Leave 'em wanting more.
DeleteThanks for reading :)
Hi Joe, great story! Was that the original ending or did you change it?
ReplyDeleteThankYouDavid :) Yes, I did change the ending slightly.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story and it did leave me wanting more. Hood read
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